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EDIT 8/1/'18: What the heck is wrong with me oh my god I thought I had uploaded the updated version weeks ago. Ack Wingbeatt I am so sorry for that. Honestly I'm so angry at myself rn crying noises.
Anyway, I hope you like it better now. And I hope you don't mind that wait oops I'm stupid.
Old version here as like an archive or something idk: sta.sh/0177anxt9mou
Commissioned by Wingbeatt as a gift for stampedeofpuppies
Don't use the art unless you're them.
Characters belong to them too.
Ahhhh for the fiftybajillionth time, I am so very sorry it took me so long to complete!
And for the fiftybajillionthillianth time, please feel free to let me know If I got anything wrong or if there's anything you want changed!
(Sorry for not using Jol's new design. I finished the day before I got the message ^^')
Also this is my first time attempting a stormy sea background so please let me know how it turned out and let me know how I can improve.
Actually not just the background but also any part of the picture or any of my pictures in general I always appreciate feedback no matter how small or how harsh.
Anyway, I hope you like it better now. And I hope you don't mind that wait oops I'm stupid.
Old version here as like an archive or something idk: sta.sh/0177anxt9mou
Commissioned by Wingbeatt as a gift for stampedeofpuppies
Don't use the art unless you're them.
Characters belong to them too.
Ahhhh for the fiftybajillionth time, I am so very sorry it took me so long to complete!
And for the fiftybajillionthillianth time, please feel free to let me know If I got anything wrong or if there's anything you want changed!
(Sorry for not using Jol's new design. I finished the day before I got the message ^^')
Also this is my first time attempting a stormy sea background so please let me know how it turned out and let me know how I can improve.
Actually not just the background but also any part of the picture or any of my pictures in general I always appreciate feedback no matter how small or how harsh.
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1333x1000px 1.11 MB
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NOTE: Writing everything thats coming to mind haha
Now to start off, this is a beautiful piece. Its absolutely wonderful.
the characters are amazingly proportioned and they look realistic.
the only thing i think that this piece could use is a more show off of lighting and shading.
While it looks stunning as it is, i think the shadows could be a little more darker to really make the storm and lightning more prominent.
Speaking of the lightning, a little bit more lighting highlighting the waves and the characters could bring this piece into a more realistic light.
This is my honest opinion and it would probably kill me to do, would be to add rain and puddles on the ship. but thats what i would do lol
Still all in all it looks beautiful and unique, good job pasta <3